tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2947555836132631506.post7440136465633609416..comments2023-04-07T13:32:15.954+01:00Comments on The Twisted Quill: Job sortedSteve Greenhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/18414279461366098783noreply@blogger.comBlogger8125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2947555836132631506.post-90211946435735361772012-05-24T10:41:27.419+01:002012-05-24T10:41:27.419+01:00Thanks Inky, I enjoyed writing this one, and it...Thanks Inky, I enjoyed writing this one, and it's nice to see a bullying manager get their comeuppance, isn't it? :-)Steve Greenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18414279461366098783noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2947555836132631506.post-23326117501437641072012-05-24T02:15:11.326+01:002012-05-24T02:15:11.326+01:00Oh this was great! I was a little tense, expectin...Oh this was great! I was a little tense, expecting the worst but I love how you wrapped it up. I like the voice of the piece too. It flowed well.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2947555836132631506.post-6300749577117770472012-05-20T16:55:34.086+01:002012-05-20T16:55:34.086+01:00Hi Deanna, and thank you. I did wonder how this on...Hi Deanna, and thank you. I did wonder how this one and "Jail bait" would be received as they are quite mild compared to many of my later stories.Steve Greenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18414279461366098783noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2947555836132631506.post-874458245983391412012-05-20T16:52:10.465+01:002012-05-20T16:52:10.465+01:00Thanks Helen, this was the type of "Story wit...Thanks Helen, this was the type of "Story with a twist in the tail" which I was writing when I first started my blog, but I very much enjoy the shorter, and often darker style that developed from it. :-)Steve Greenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18414279461366098783noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2947555836132631506.post-44433777505165889962012-05-18T13:01:13.439+01:002012-05-18T13:01:13.439+01:00Steve, this is fantastic! The suspense, the voice,...Steve, this is fantastic! The suspense, the voice, and then the nicely revealed twist - excellent! So glad you brought this one back out.Deanna Schrayerhttp://theothersideofdeanna.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2947555836132631506.post-10377870593871103412012-05-18T01:30:53.975+01:002012-05-18T01:30:53.975+01:00I really liked this story and the narrator's v...I really liked this story and the narrator's voice. The water pistol was a good twist. I can see that your style has changed, in that you now write tighter than this, but this was still a good story. ^_^Helen A. Howellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12748128819820230841noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2947555836132631506.post-10472199804928657552012-05-14T10:34:53.188+01:002012-05-14T10:34:53.188+01:00Haha! Thanks Brinda. :-)Haha! Thanks Brinda. :-)Steve Greenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18414279461366098783noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2947555836132631506.post-46180622821987276722012-05-14T03:14:50.106+01:002012-05-14T03:14:50.106+01:00Wat-er relief!! Nicely done Steve :)Wat-er relief!! Nicely done Steve :)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com