tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2947555836132631506.post3611415939198380984..comments2023-04-07T13:32:15.954+01:00Comments on The Twisted Quill: Jail baitSteve Greenhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/18414279461366098783noreply@blogger.comBlogger16125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2947555836132631506.post-1434837684740610862012-05-24T10:44:17.427+01:002012-05-24T10:44:17.427+01:00Thanks Inky, I'm glad it gave you a chuckle. :...Thanks Inky, I'm glad it gave you a chuckle. :-)Steve Greenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18414279461366098783noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2947555836132631506.post-39172786437640513482012-05-24T02:28:02.490+01:002012-05-24T02:28:02.490+01:00Ha! I'm in a lull at work reading the most re...Ha! I'm in a lull at work reading the most recent Friday Flashes and I actually laughed out loud at this one. Cleverly written!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2947555836132631506.post-25843741859904051302012-05-23T10:20:02.300+01:002012-05-23T10:20:02.300+01:00Thanks Brinda. Good typo-catch too, edited now. ...Thanks Brinda. Good typo-catch too, edited now. :-)Steve Greenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18414279461366098783noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2947555836132631506.post-13433061913492641642012-05-23T01:29:57.463+01:002012-05-23T01:29:57.463+01:00Phew! you are so good at building up the tension S...Phew! you are so good at building up the tension Steve! This line caught my eye --"I made my way deeper into the throng, Hoping for safety in numbers." is that capital H a small 'h'?Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2947555836132631506.post-73881763091222960642012-05-21T23:53:28.191+01:002012-05-21T23:53:28.191+01:00Hiya Rebecca, and thank you.
As I replied to Mazz...Hiya Rebecca, and thank you.<br /><br />As I replied to Mazzz's comment, it was you and Mazzz who suggested that I post my stories to #fridayflash, and so the week after I posted this story to my blog I posted "A Zombie's tale" to #fridayflash, and I was absolutely delighted with the response, and the warm welcome I received. #ff has given me so much enjoyment since then.Steve Greenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18414279461366098783noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2947555836132631506.post-61290414855544573372012-05-21T10:39:29.755+01:002012-05-21T10:39:29.755+01:00Thanks Tim. A zombie would have been a good twist,...Thanks Tim. A zombie would have been a good twist, wouldn't it? :-)Steve Greenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18414279461366098783noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2947555836132631506.post-19133734652597209362012-05-20T22:26:30.063+01:002012-05-20T22:26:30.063+01:00Nice job of building tension. I guessed there woul...Nice job of building tension. I guessed there would be a humorous twist at the end. Or a zombie.Tim VanSant Writeshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17614259042362664840noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2947555836132631506.post-9150793103737462122012-05-20T17:15:05.332+01:002012-05-20T17:15:05.332+01:00Hiya Marsha, and thank you. the MC was a tad nervy...Hiya Marsha, and thank you. the MC was a tad nervy of things going badly too. :-)Steve Greenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18414279461366098783noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2947555836132631506.post-57119419248889979122012-05-20T17:09:55.528+01:002012-05-20T17:09:55.528+01:00It's a really good feeling to know that the mi...It's a really good feeling to know that the misdirection paid off, isn't it? Thanks for the lovely comment Deanna. :-)Steve Greenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18414279461366098783noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2947555836132631506.post-55078437262212207602012-05-20T17:00:52.309+01:002012-05-20T17:00:52.309+01:00Thanks Helen, I just love using misdirection, it m...Thanks Helen, I just love using misdirection, it makes me feel a bit impish. :-)Steve Greenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18414279461366098783noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2947555836132631506.post-51669643445984253552012-05-20T16:59:49.726+01:002012-05-20T16:59:49.726+01:00Thank you Mazzz. I also have yourself and Rebecca ...Thank you Mazzz. I also have yourself and Rebecca Emin to thank for guiding me to the #fridayflash site, and the enjoyment that it has given to me.Steve Greenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18414279461366098783noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2947555836132631506.post-72568863158534151812012-05-18T15:22:42.519+01:002012-05-18T15:22:42.519+01:00LOL! Had me scared for a moment...thought things w...LOL! Had me scared for a moment...thought things were going to go badly.Marsha Loftishttp://marshaloftis.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2947555836132631506.post-45346121323503405972012-05-18T14:02:25.060+01:002012-05-18T14:02:25.060+01:00Ahahaha! Fantastic tension Steve and that twisted ...Ahahaha! Fantastic tension Steve and that twisted ending is superb - I never suspected.Deanna Schrayerhttp://theothersideofdeanna.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2947555836132631506.post-39515709772724541982012-05-18T11:58:03.016+01:002012-05-18T11:58:03.016+01:00There is great suspense in this, and I like the re...There is great suspense in this, and I like the reveal.Rebecca Eminhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01931904595437049369noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2947555836132631506.post-30800486808898779622012-05-18T11:07:50.311+01:002012-05-18T11:07:50.311+01:00Ha ha, good piece of misdirection, well done.Ha ha, good piece of misdirection, well done.Helen A. Howellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12748128819820230841noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2947555836132631506.post-9366264613445879202010-09-14T18:57:27.842+01:002010-09-14T18:57:27.842+01:00Ha! Very clever. Great misdirection there.Ha! Very clever. Great misdirection there.mazzz in Leedshttp://mazzz-in-leeds.comnoreply@blogger.com